Self Critique of Movement

The more I work with this piece, the more I enjoy it. I didn't do any color correction for the final piece: I focused on cleaning up audio and taking Jill's criticism and working it into the piece. I imagine that we will have one more critique tomorrow in class, and the piece may see one more reincarnation before I turn it in Thursday for the Spring Screening (which I have submitted 5 pieces as of right now.) God I hope I get screened, that would be glorious. Back to the problem at hand- there are still some areas in the piece that I feel need more fine tuning- notably the audio "clicks" every now and then, and since I've listened to it a bajillion times, I pick it up. Also, I think I play with the levels even more, and I need feedback on the rythym of the overlayed voice. But as a whole, I like the project and think it is successful. Is it perfect? Far from it. But I'm proud that I was able to take an idea I had and make it into something that I can watch and unfold before me. Now I just need to see whats gonna go down for the critique.